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Oh. That's SO dark. Although nice use of summer fruits.
Thanks for taking a look! I’ve been trending darker lately; it feels right.
Perfect!
Thank you! Appreciate the feedback.
Hmm, interesting - I hadn’t considered it before (this was intended to be a microfiction story and nothing more), but there is an opportunity to go longer with this. Maybe I’ll dabble with that.
Thank you for describing it as “appalling”! It’s the highest compliment, really. Exactly the reaction I hoped for.
Oh. That's SO dark. Although nice use of summer fruits.
Thanks for taking a look! I’ve been trending darker lately; it feels right.
Perfect!
Thank you! Appreciate the feedback.
Hmm, interesting - I hadn’t considered it before (this was intended to be a microfiction story and nothing more), but there is an opportunity to go longer with this. Maybe I’ll dabble with that.
Thank you for describing it as “appalling”! It’s the highest compliment, really. Exactly the reaction I hoped for.