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A. R. Eldridge's avatar

Man, part 2 is really going to slap...

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Parker McCoy's avatar

I'm wondering about the idiot on Reddit. Haha. I feel sorry for the elephant, but I don't know. Maybe he has a point. Get it done right once and then she won't have to be bothered again. I'm really glad I'm glad I' not an elephant right now.

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Max Echard's avatar

This is deranged in the most elegant, methodical way. You never flinch.

The chessboard—That’s the kind of quiet psychosis that makes a piece unforgettable.

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Bryan Wiler's avatar

One of my favorite comments ever, Max. Now I know how to explain my writing when people ask: “deranged in the most elegant, methodical way.” Thanks for checking it out.

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