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Luca Zani's avatar

Great piece of work bryan!

Bryan Wiler's avatar

Thank you, Luca!

The Transom's avatar

That is a mighty strong piece of writing my friend.

Bryan Wiler's avatar

appreciate you, Sean - thanks for reading it, and restacking

swedendrift | writer's avatar

Really solid piece of work. Wonderful imagery and flow.

Bryan Wiler's avatar

Thank you! Stories typically feel relatively easy for me to write (once I have an idea, anyways) and this one was the complete opposite. It all felt hard.

paul latham's avatar

Great story and your most ambitious work yet.

Bryan Wiler's avatar

Thank you, sir. It had (and still has) the feel of a story I could go REALLY long with, but I don’t think I have the patience for anything much beyond 5,000 words.

Mac Sitko's avatar

ambulance donuts instead of catharsis, ha!

Bryan Wiler's avatar

Instead of, or as - I’m not sure which at this point